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-                <p style="padding: 10px;">Hi! I'm Violet, a 15 year old web and game developer. I make server-sided dynamic websites, with majority of rendering being done on the server, no Javascript needed! I'm currently making games in the Godot Engine, and my dynamic sites in NodeJS.</p>
+                <p style="padding: 10px;">Hi, I'm Violet! a 15 year old web and game developer. I make dynamic websites with server-side rendering, so no Javascript needed! I'm currently making games in the Godot Engine, and my dynamic sites in NodeJS.</p>
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